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In the rewritten version, Jained lapses into untranslated Wagaibe rather than cursing in English as I had him doing before. Wagaibe is his native tongue, usually either left untranslated or represented with double brackets <<>>. The language they are speaking, in single brackets, is shaghar-dan, the language of the Tolshay Kahn, Lord Kheheli's people.
"Kehhhhh" is a trailing-off, relatively non-vulgar way of saying kuru (shit) ... like English speakers will say "shoot!" or "goldarn".
"Fen-eferka" means "You will be screwed." (He's speaking Wagaibe, though, so Lord Kheheli doesn't understand him.)
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